I wonder as I wander
Out under the sky
Why do people I care about
Always have to die?
Are you happy where you are,
Wherever that may be?
I wonder as I wander
Do you still think of me?
Is it nice up there in heaven?
For I know you made it there.
Are the clouds made out of marshmallows?
Do you know that I still care?
I look up at the winter sky,
And shed a single tear.
I think of all the days gone by,
I'll always hold you dear.
I wonder as I wander
Out under the sky
Why do people I care about
Always have to die?
7 comments:
Hey, even I've written something similar once, long back. Wonder why death is inevitable. I loved these lines:
"Is it nice up there in heaven? For I know you made it there.
Are the clouds made out of marshmallows? "
aww baby... i knw death is sad... and sumtyms u just dnt knw y it hpnd... n u drown in it...
really..i dun feel lk commenting on poems... czz dats pure emotion... n deres never a same or definite set of interpretation fr poetry...! its more lk an expression... n its never bad or good... real or surreal... ryt or wrong...!!
n yeah... i liked dis one too...!! :) hehe
woah... thats so amazing... i really dunno wat to say but it was amazing!
Okay..now ur writing poetry. That was pretty good...plenty of emotion...and quite touching. It was quite nice. :)
Nd im sure ur quality of lyrics would improve with time. But this was quite commendable.
very nice...a little bit scary..but i guess most things true, are....
Hey I dunno who you are or where your from u belong..what I do know is writing & sharing has no boundaries..your free..so when I came across your blog I felt...
This is amazing pure though the emotions raw....they are wonderfully portrayed !!
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