The day has drawn its curtains and called it quits,
The boisterous addressings have given way to the sound of silence,
The boastful exuberance of light has shown the white flag to evanescence of the dark,
And the beautiful loner up above basks in its eternal youth that fascinates the hearts and mind alike….
There I see an unknown realm, opening its wide chasm,
taking my hands to adorn it with golden handcuffs,
promising galore to satiate my quest for life.
I stand motionless, terrified inside,
with eyes wide open and groping for fair weathers.
These befooled eyes, which find the boulevards ahead , a way to ultimate enchantment!!
Standing at the threshold of life ahead,
Where fantasy becomes the inseparable twin of reality,
I hear the birds chirp.
I find the breeze caress tender,
and let my trembling feet show me the path that beckons.
Transitory, the world is, and so was this unknown ecstasy.
No sooner, the mystic realm transforms to
the closed walls of a rustic Dungeon.
Those fairytale bracelets morphing into unbreakable, unforgiving shackles.
The sunny boulevards, into the labyrinth that knows no end.
The birds are now the creatures of night.
Feet remained stranded on the roads,
from where there was no turning back.
Where emotions slumber deep,
and the very human existence is besieged by vain perplexities.
Where ambiguity is used to conceal the truth,
and the container holds more prestige than the content itself.
Yet, all that could be done was to move on……
In the wild goose chase of the life that holds a promise.
That never lets down its seeker,
and opens the world of rainbow hues,
to cut the monotony of black and white.
I dragged my feet,
to take the step ahead.
to go beyond the shadows of the past.
Towards the divine,
that seeks its ultimate manifestation in me.
I fall.
Lips parted enough to facilitate breathing in and out.
Lie abandoned,
with the chronic drain of all that is left in my mortal.
Just as the Grim Reaper sights my flesh,
and moves forward to embrace….
The slight opening of my eyes and lips proclaim ex cathedra
“my cross is my medal; my scars beautify me….
And I adorn them with sheer grace.
I’ve drank the wine from the purest fountain,
and seen the sun crossing the horizons.
If life is the opera of unseen,
then I’ am its proud mistress.
LET GO………….!!!
The light of the day hallows my name…!!!”
errr ok ... i know what your thinking.... i have intentionally used words from some popular songs to give sort of an effect... though i really dont know what effect i'm looking for!
10 comments:
hey really nice...totally contrasting ur previous post... amazing...
Wow!!! I loved the first 4 lines...and good confession at the end...there is a very good effect but just like you, even I don't know what effect it is :D ...keep writing..
P.S : My blog updated : )
wow! real nice...
Drifted from rajesh's blog..
Interesting blog must say.. :).. was kind of wondering what you were trying to think.. and kind of got distracted by Orlando's pic on the side.. :)
would love to know what is it that you were thinking..
@ rajesh - hehe kinda creepy i guess
@ harini n jahnabi - thanks guys!
@ ani - i thought of movement from one horizon, realm, dimension ..... to another...somethin like standing on heavens gate...
hey really nice one...
I have no idea what kinda effect u were looking for..but the lines and the words n how the whole thing came together...it was really great writing!!
lovely words...you have crafted the moments so beautifully...wonderful!
uh...good post...the lyrics were good...but seriously u need to rhyme ur words more to make it look like a poetry. But oderwise it was pretty good...but do try rhyming.
that was awesome, man!
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